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Eternal_Crown
Eternal_CrownLv3Eternal_Crown

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Shady_king
Shady_kingLv14Shady_king

The chance that Arthur is actually King Arthur is pretty cool. Curious if JKS will add anymore historical figures to the story. Please give 3 likes. I at least want to reach level 4 to gain another power stone to help out this story and MDS, and I'm nearly there

bob_jo
bob_joLv15bob_jo

King Author.....? Like king of Camelot Author?

hiskiafrans
hiskiafransLv13hiskiafrans

Next we will see the strongest mage, Merlin Blade.

Satkre
SatkreLv15Satkre

Quinn gonna learn from the original punisher.

DaoistAGc2fc
DaoistAGc2fcLv14DaoistAGc2fc

Brilliant that's an incredible chapter. Thanks and happy birthday

Alexryo
AlexryoLv15Alexryo

So would that make Vincent a gen 1 or gen 2 vampire leader? And is that why the punishers were hunted down, because they weren't "original" vampires?

Dragimlin
DragimlinLv15Dragimlin

Well that is a turn, if this Arthur is the King Arthur. Or is he a descendant of Arthur? Interesting either way.

NixiePixie
NixiePixieLv11NixiePixie

wait...what?

Kyle_Smith_7680
Kyle_Smith_7680Lv14Kyle_Smith_7680

fantastic chapter! cant believe its king arthur. I'm curious if its THAT king arthur or someone else. either way. awesome!

magmaron25
magmaron25Lv4magmaron25

Sad Arthur

Brett_Marchinkow
Brett_MarchinkowLv15Brett_Marchinkow

I'm so pumped to see what happens next I wish I just started the boom today and wasn't caught up so that I'd catch up after all this is explained! but I know if still feel the same always wanting more XD

zelosu
zelosuLv15zelosu

love the twist, thank you for the chapter, but please take care of yourself đŸ„ș

Shadow_Lucifer
Shadow_LuciferLv15Shadow_Lucifer

Really king aurther đŸ˜”đŸ€Šâ€â™€ïžđŸ€” what next jeus

Grant_Walker_0416
Grant_Walker_0416Lv14Grant_Walker_0416

This should be a interesting back story and I can't wait to find out more

Sandman2288
Sandman2288Lv14Sandman2288

Nice back story

Edamame_8
Edamame_8Lv15Edamame_8

holy smokes!!! this back story is freaking juicy as meatballs.

TrevasNegras
TrevasNegrasLv15TrevasNegras

holllyyyy moooolllllyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!

Prathibha_Menon
Prathibha_MenonLv3Prathibha_Menon

Interesting hmmm

Travis_Beecher
Travis_BeecherLv12Travis_Beecher

loved the writing. virtually zero typos, good dialogue, well done. again, I must say. splitting his telling of the story into two chapters doesn't feel right. but you did break it at a good moment if there was one, so well done there.

Ian_Motchka
Ian_MotchkaLv14Ian_Motchka

so then where is excalibur and merlin in all this??