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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

zcxx
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Wtf??? that portal mechanism is trash, whoever create that must be a failure of a scientist, why make the destination random and not point to point teleportation... It would have been more believable if the reason why they're standed ia the lack of energy to take them back, and there are more than just one portal to come out from so they will be separated.

Jonathon_Keagle
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well keep in mind. the portals are reverse engineered from alien tech. the humans do not fully understand how to utilize them and know very little on the actuality of them. all they know is how to replicate them. look at it like this. you take a test. tou decide not to study for it. it is asking questions you do not understand. so you copy the answers from a cheat sheet. does that mean you know how to come up with the answer on your own? no, you just replicate what you saw. just like with the portals.

venomouss9000
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Rule number 1 never turn your back to a possible enemy

ScarlatBlood
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It feels like the chapters are getting a bit shorter

mysubiegostututu
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Wish I could access more without paying

mike_harward
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bro I need more coins and fast passes

High_Ground
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Spencer_Jones_2771
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I really like this story. To bad it seems to be going the way of a lot of the other good stories on this crap site and moving more and more to a style to maximize the number of chapters at the cost of the writing of the book. The authors all see that if they post more chapters they can get more of the credits for ranking and slowly the chapters start getting shorter and now it’s turning into not even half of the story of a chapter should be.

Pheonixare_803
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me too, i don't have money cuz i ain't an adult, so i can only wait for free passes

Pheonixare_803
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Hey guys pls juts like this comment I need 2 likes to get a free pass. Also, I have never used webnovel before, does every story need to unlock with coins or free pass?

HopeScar
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I am so into this book

Alisha_Sharma_6503
Alisha_Sharma_6503Lv3Alisha_Sharma_6503

Chapter are so small that i am able to read it in a min, don't like it, it's like webnovel support the authors for writing short chapter, on ********** these stories contain around 5000 words or more and some of them daily release 2 chapter a day which is like seriously great compared to this.

DaoistifgR9M
DaoistifgR9MLv2DaoistifgR9M

the chapters are getting shorter but at the same time getting more interesting

gbemileke_olujobi
gbemileke_olujobiLv1gbemileke_olujobi

the book is getting more interesting but I wonder will the planet be some kind of dark age with no sun at all because that might be the only way for him to survive

tumwills
tumwillsLv4tumwills

Hopefully they'll find each other

pinklovers
pinkloversLv13pinklovers

Thanks for the chapter

Niloysom_Das
Niloysom_DasLv5Niloysom_Das

Good!

Xamar
XamarLv11Xamar

I don’t like the chapter title, cause it’s obvious what will happen after the portal appears, Near spioler!

death_hawk2832
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I think Peter is screwed once they get out

DaoistrSQ6Gr
DaoistrSQ6GrLv11DaoistrSQ6Gr

Chapters need to be longer

Kelly_Shields
Kelly_ShieldsLv11Kelly_Shields

love this series, but I agree that the chapters are way too short. But the author does know how to keep me in suspense.lol

Jokester
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I dont like to pay