Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

This story is building up pretty nicely . Keep up the good work author . I don't know how tough it is for you to write two novels at the same time . But best of luck to you because it might turn into a good novel just like reincarnated into a human . And climb through the rank to snatch a good spot .

guys stop calling the MC dumb, there people like that here in our world too, and maybe the MC is not a imaginative and fantasy reader type of guy. not everyone can think out off the box even if the facts are in front of them. we all have ego that sometimes stop us from believing things that are outside the norm

No one: Readers when the author make one mistake: The mC Is ReTarDed

mc : i am weaken in sunlight , vorden : you're weaken in sunlight ? thats a vampire mc: i'm must be werewolf *reads a lore " MC: no way . i'm v ..... ?

Yeah, sure, why not just tell this friendly stranger your only weakness.

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nice chap👍

thanks for the chapter

Blood

Now, we’re getting somewhere! Quinn is headed in the right direction. Haha, the system only gives out hot/cold responses at the moment!

lol "WHAT" Killed me

The development is really good!! Building up quite nicely, written better than most stories.

Ohhhhh shiiiiiiiiiiii- *neck gets torn open as he starts to drink the gushing blood*

yup

I think I would complete this novel😏

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I think things will go smoother if you tell Vorden, he seems like an easy going guy