godadi
Hi Godadi, I've been enjoying your novel a lot, but feel it could use a bit of editing. I'm going to copy a chapter or two into googledocs and spruce them up a bit. I'll watch my notifications for a reply here, or you can contact me on discord I'm loeri#3783. If you prefer an email I'll give you that, but I would prefer to not give it out in such a public place. Hope to hear from you soon!