Comments of chapter undefined of The Rebirth of SOPHIA GREEN
The Rebirth of SOPHIA GREEN
AnnaShannel_Lin
Chapter comments186
Just based on the synopsis I know I'll probably enjoy this... my concern and only problem would be the fucking WALL. Those BIG BRICK WALLS OF TEXT. Please add some breathing room or somewhere in the text where I can stop, even if it's only for a moment, then I can safely look back at the page and Not get lost, having to re-read a whole Bric- I mean paragraph all over again, just to find where I looked away from the screen
I can tell this isn't the author's first language. There are some awkwardly worded sentences. Moreover, the huge wall of text (as someone pointed out before). I had to break it down before reading. Advice to the author, try to break down and separate thoughts and actions. Otherwise it will end up as a huge wall of text like it is right now. However the synopsis and cover is simply beautiful, it stands out from the other entries. I will read more to see if the writing style improves as the chapters progress. The author has written many books before so I will set the bar higher expectation wise.
