Comments of chapter undefined of The Spider Queen
The Spider Queen
HopelesslyRomantic
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Looking forward to some back to basic friend and loved ones time with Sophie. I want to hear the interesting things that we have missed with moon, and Cleo along with Astrid and her siblings and Quina. I missed these characters as there was no real mention of them as the last arc was all on Sophie. I can’t wait to hear the interaction between her and her friends and to find out what happens with her and Lilly. I hope they stay in close contact and continue the big sister and little sister relationship they have. Keep up the great work Hopelessly Romantic 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😊😊😊😊😋 Once daddy finally lets Sophie free to see her friends, Cleo will be locking her up in her room for a bit 😂😂😊😊🤗😋😋
Such a wonderful chapter to really see into Sophie and bringing us back to the love we had for characters we haven’t seen in months. Thanks for the chapter! There’s so much content to be shown for everyone she sees again as well as Lily’s family that it would be upsetting if you brushed over some of them. If I may say my personal advice, please don’t resort to jumping to reactions after Sophie tells her story to them. It feels so unsatisying to not see or hear peoples reactions to moments in her story for the sake of speeding along the plot/chapter. I know we’ve read the whole story, but the reactions of characters are just as entertaining. Like having a line that says that Sophie told them everything that happened and then going straight to the reactions of the characters she told. Please don’t make it that unsatisfying. But you’ve been amazing as a writer this whole book, so keep it up!
