Good ass book, not the best grammar but still easily readable. Nice change to plot.
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Hey i enjoy your story its pretty good even tho its not the type of fanfic i usually prefer its still hits the points and has good grammar keep up the work
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EXP tig9. K m k ,8 , t n e f b 9 du. If If If gb g9 ho ff ie r u. B pho. As x 5d5. G80b 8h 9n hh. R. F8g 8g h pn on lm no mm m pn non b9 g9 non 8g9 h 9h9h non h9.
only some small grammar mistake, overall, a good & interesting concept for a danmachi fic.
