Alright, to be quite honest I was excited when I found a DLS fanfic novel. However, I'm disappointed. From the bad Grammer ( misspelling, capitulation, keywords ), and world explanation. The only thing I found right was the character descriptive writing, though there were some misha** here and there. Out of all of those things the worst thing I found was Saki's personality. It's not the neutral "no emotion" character. It's more of a chaotic out of character personality. Like a steak in the veggie isle. It doesn't fit. I guess what I'm trying to say is good idea bad execution.
