Reviews of Pharaoh : The Last Sun

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Okay, here is my honest review. The plot is good, the story is really good. Your imagination amazes me. But when you write, always capitalize words that needed to be capitalized, e.g, names of people or places. Try to do research before just writing down a scenario. Like the king was losing blood and he felt hot to the touch. A person losing blood will feel cold and not hot. If you plan to have action scenes, always check for the effects of certain things and happenings. Anyways, I'll add this to library because it's good.