Comments of chapter undefined of Isekai For My Ex

Dialogs are difficult to compose. Some critics say that quotation marks need dialogue, others say they don’t need to. Some say that dialogues should be framed as - plays. Person 1 - Monologue Person 2 - dialogue Still others say dialogue must be alive. Dialogue should be worked on. It may not be necessary to start the novel right away with dialogue, but on the other hand, this is how the author sees his novel. I, too, have not quite figured out the dialogs yet. I only see that it’s rough, probably you and I should read on the Internet how to make dialogs correctly. Good luck!

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The start grasp me to keep reading to the next

A great start! Cherring for author!

It's interesting!

The beginning is interesting!

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Awesome!

Well it was nice. I liked the sweet scene. It was refreshing. It will be better if you past tenses though.

Looks intriguing

thanks for the chapter

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