Comments of chapter undefined of The Most OP'est Human? (Nier Automata Fanfic)
The Most OP'est Human? (Nier Automata Fanfic)
Aldunhokoron
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i_like_pizzaLv12i_like_pizza
A Nier FANFIC is quite rare on this page that gives you some points, but so far your novel is depressing and full of violence/sadness against automatons. If that continues you will ruin it, only people with sadistic tendencies will be interested in reading about abuses and tragedies.
AldunhokoronAuthorAldunhokoron
i_like_pizza:It does not need to be all happy and smiles, but your descriptions so far have been very depressing, it is true that the world of NIER is quite brutal and full of fights, but giving an example, in previous chapters you have described how some androids fight and they end up sacrificing themselves for the mission, without being able to be rebuilt, when you could describe a very intense fight and that the androids before the mission have loaded their data. Yet you have made them all disappear permanently. I don't know if I'm explaining myself, your story is dark and you should add a tag. Personally, I would have abandoned the novel in those chapters if it wasn't weird, but if that continues, I'll have to do it because I'm here looking for a fun and relaxing moment, not reading depressing things.
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manuel91Lv4manuel91
Thank you for the chapters. Author do you also publish somewhere else? Because with the new changes introduced by webnovel that force everyone to use the application it is practically impossible to read with any browser on the website and it is even worse for those who are not English speakers like me, who have to use Google Translate or others.