Aldunhokoron
A Nier FANFIC is quite rare on this page that gives you some points, but so far your novel is depressing and full of violence/sadness against automatons. If that continues you will ruin it, only people with sadistic tendencies will be interested in reading about abuses and tragedies.
Yeah but Nier automata isn’t all rainbows and sunshines afterall. I could just use the same method I use for my other fic and let everyone be happy but that’s not the world I’m trying to build here. Also its not necessarily true that only people with sadistic tendencies would read this. This fic is aimed at the adults readers so naturally some aspects of it is a lot darker. Younger people might not understand it and that’s also why I have warnings in the fic. And besides things will get better in the future chapters.
Thank you for the chapters. Author do you also publish somewhere else? Because with the new changes introduced by webnovel that force everyone to use the application it is practically impossible to read with any browser on the website and it is even worse for those who are not English speakers like me, who have to use Google Translate or others.