Hana_Frederica
Author you have a good story line but the grammar.. am guessing English is not your first languageš š š if you want i can help you edit it would make the story better and easier to readš
Iām liking the concept of this story, both end up in coma. He does for real and she just loses consciousness for a few days. Love the fact that although heās unconscious he knows what is going on around him, heās aware. Some ppl do really believe that as well. The concept of the soul traveling when the person falls in a coma is also very interesting. These theoretical beliefs incorporated in these type of novels is very fascinating to me. š¤