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Comments of chapter undefined of The Tyrant Gentle Husband

Amorrrr
AmorrrrLv4Amorrrr

Author you have a good story line but the grammar.. am guessing English is not your first languagešŸ˜…šŸ˜…šŸ˜… if you want i can help you edit it would make the story better and easier to readšŸ˜‰

DL1994
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abigailsan
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good start but grammatical errors are rampant author you should find an editor though some volunteered already, take advantage of it

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Tanya_Winters
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I like the concept but I keep getting distracted by the grammar. Sorry.

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yati6158
yati6158Lv13yati6158

Good start. I like this kind of writing. The simple and smooth introduction. Easy for me to understand without cracking my brain. Keep it up!!

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Reeta_1
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SweetxMelodz
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the story is very good it looks like my fast past will run out soon:" Success always for youā™”

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Ely_Perez
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Iā€™m liking the concept of this story, both end up in coma. He does for real and she just loses consciousness for a few days. Love the fact that although heā€™s unconscious he knows what is going on around him, heā€™s aware. Some ppl do really believe that as well. The concept of the soul traveling when the person falls in a coma is also very interesting. These theoretical beliefs incorporated in these type of novels is very fascinating to me. šŸ¤“

DaoistKmzkeO
DaoistKmzkeOLv1DaoistKmzkeO

confusing. am i right thinking that The Elena (poor) reading a novel book at present life is the one transmigrated to other Elena-the wife of Luke? So its a 2 woman named Elena here?

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Nez0112
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Hmmm think grammar was kind of fix however the insert of thr editors on every sentence or paragraph is annoying

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Karinabze40
Karinabze40Lv10Karinabze40

OK I'm gonna keep reading

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dubbyuy
dubbyuyLv15dubbyuy

terrible...

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Waves09
Waves09Lv12Waves09

interesting..

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Flo25
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Good šŸ™‚

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Soraya_Djh
Soraya_DjhLv3Soraya_Djh

good start.

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mayahart5256
mayahart5256Lv1mayahart5256

nice story

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novelcomiclover_
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stupid husband on the comic

Kirti_Dumbre
Kirti_DumbreLv2Kirti_Dumbre

Interesting ā˜ŗļø

storygirl
storygirlLv15storygirl

well, did he at least give her money in the divorce? maybe she can start a new life once she is thrown out of the house to support herself. soo hearbreaking he didnt love her at allšŸ„ŗ

Esther_Okoye_Obere
Esther_Okoye_ObereLv1Esther_Okoye_Obere

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Nung_Dam
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon