Comments of chapter undefined of Astrid - The Hybrid Princess

I really love your style of narrating the story and the view of the fantasy world. Awesome keep it up👌🏻

My money on Astrid girl being the hybrid.

The fairy tale vibe is sooo strong!

The beginning resembles medieval tales. Good to read to this music - https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=ssAI-0KyTGc

I noticed that the chapter has some really big blocks of text. I think it would make it look nicer and easier to read if you split up the big chunks of text. But nice chapter nonetheless:)

I barely read the first chapter and I am in love with this book

Beautiful beginning 😌 I’m looking forward to what’s to come :) Thank you author for sharing this jewel with us 😘

Hi, I'm Victoria, an editor from Dreame. After viewing all your works, we would like to give you an offer: to be our full-time writer. If you have an interest, pls contact victoriayu.stary@gmail.com. Victoria

👌

Is the mc the elve and is he strong???

So far something is telling me that Astrid is that lost princess of the Fairies and Mer people.

great way of telling some backstory to your readers. :)

Imagine the aunt is the former maid, and astrid is the lost baby of our queen. Me imagining an Astrid walking over a hill once the sun sets upon the it at the eas. 😮 I've only read chapter one, so if I'm wrong please don't spoil. Other than that I enjoy the first chapter and am interested in seeing more. - nods-

5💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

I lo e reading magical stories of strength, love, ambition and heroism .

yo

[img=exp]

💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

I love it