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Comments of chapter undefined of Black Onyx - Forgotten Magic

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superuser
superuserLv14superuser

Well, what should I comment? The story is good enough to not warrant any complaints. And showering with praise every turn… doesn't seem like a useful contribution. You know, no news is good news.

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CrazyTony_12
CrazyTony_12Lv14CrazyTony_12

Tbh I’m very impressed with the magic system you have created. I know u said you don’t do that much planning but so far it has been very immersive

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Nate_Winslow
Nate_WinslowLv4Nate_Winslow

I love this story. I love Gerald. I love the everything.

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Draekan
DraekanLv15Draekan

Gerald 100% should have requested to get a look at anything that's found within the building. with his memory he would Rember it all even if he didn't decide to magic photocopy it. And the bishop wouldn't think he would gain anything from just looking at a unreadable language

QisTheWise
QisTheWiseLv13QisTheWise

Oh shut up, old man! You know we lurkers love you!