Well, what should I comment? The story is good enough to not warrant any complaints. And showering with praise every turn… doesn't seem like a useful contribution. You know, no news is good news.
Gerald 100% should have requested to get a look at anything that's found within the building. with his memory he would Rember it all even if he didn't decide to magic photocopy it. And the bishop wouldn't think he would gain anything from just looking at a unreadable language