Comments of chapter undefined of World's First Demon Lord

*Gets stabbed* "I will make sure you always lose the left sock and will sprain your ankle every month" *Dies*

It seems good. I'll give it a try.

really impressed by the storyline it has a lot of potential keep it up

Very powerful, great start to this! really want to keep reading!

Sass: Check Magic: Check 'Antagonist' mc: check I'm sold

I realy like storys thats start with : but this is not this story 😂

Did not expect to see a comment from me on the beginning of a book ever

I really like the start of this! The old mage has some good sass :)

Very good, i will try it

Potential Up the Wazoo, can't wait for more!

wow! already I am blown away by this! I'm excited, both as a reader and as a writer looking to learn. great job!

I’m really impressed with this first chapter it’s a great start to a hopefully great book

This first chapter has me hooked

This is not that story. Owo Alright, man, alright...

nice.

Sold

ok ngl that’s very intriguing. tf did the mage do that was so bad that it warrants his murderer as a hero :0 also, love the cover art and (because i get horny off of really good writing question mark) that friggin grammar is 😙😙😙 Love this so far. Adding <3

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Fate plays with human for the readers fate create heros ,demons ,gods , dragons for the sole purpose to amusing the reader but the reader always want to be the mc