Comments of chapter undefined of The Mysterious Black Magician
The Mysterious Black Magician
Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Chapter comments33
The story is certainly interesting and setting has a good potential, but there are points I really hope will be explained in the coming chapters: -How are first skills given? Because I can't think of a system that would be first come first served and still make sense. -What are skills exactly? Because I was really put off seeing mention of fireballs and magicians after you spent so long explaining the setting scientifically. (the RESONANCE part also looked a lot more like magic than SF. I would expect something like the ball melting in the hand, merging with the blood stream and a necklace appearing. For example.) And how does that relate to the positive and negative energies, which are the only basis for everything supernatural in the setting? -What is the relation between the positive/negative energies, the beast's mutation and the way humanity found to fight them? Probably the obvious one, but we were just told on one side the disaster and mutations, then the deity system and limit break, and on the other side an unrelated way to fight monsters. I am worried we will not be told because you even mentioned "there is a reason for the use of gold points" but nothing about those (seemingly more immediately relevant) points. The setting starts strong and well thought out, but the end seems more like a rushed finish to include cool stuffs like magic and a starting handicap for the main character. I just hope the novel quickly decides what it wants to be.
First The author through at us a lot of half scientific half bullshit explanations. And now we have some thugs that allmost kill him (twice?) and nothing seems a problem. How come in a world where human life becomes rare it is so easy to bully and attempt murder? (here you will say: they cant die since they have the system deity, but still this is absurd for me.) The story has barely started and we have already more clichés than most chinese novels does. I’ll endure another few chapters, if these none senses keep poping up it will end up in a bad review...
