Reviews of MotB [Outdated]

The story is great and very engaging, the characters are interesting and can improve, the background story can be further explored, the updates of the chapters are usually very fast. I really like this novel and I hope the author does not give up.

Honestly, I don't like female leads much, because as a male I cannot relate to her in any way, and females tend to be, how should I say this without coming off as a mysognistic arsehole, well, unsuited for being ruthless, but this web novel is came off kind of different to me, it drew my attention in, and was able to keep me from losing that attention, the author's writing style is cool, the chapters upload rate isnt half bad too, story progression seems to be steady, and not just some made up stuff on the spot. Good job author?!

Very nice build up, although the character background is somewhat lacking, but I presume that the author will cover that up in future chapters hopefully, The main character herself, is a very interesting person, they way she operates is very intriguing, her thought process is very interesting, and it draws you as you find yourself very focused on the events transpiring. 3 words Immersive as f*ck!?!

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The title page immediately attracts attention. Synopsis is too long. The chapters are big. The test block is rich in dialogs, the novel immediately begins to play with the colors of communication. The story is somewhat chaotic, the psychology of the characters is not always clear. But overall a very intriguing story.

I realy enjoy how the author is working hard to keep releaseing more chapters. I realy love reading storys similasito this one i must realy thank you for you hard work author. Thank You.

I'm at chapter seven and I already like this bring me more........................................................................... :)

Really good!! But... I need MORE!!! 👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👌👍

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I do not know what the Author hast changed in comparison to the Story before. But I must das that I really enjoy reading this Story. It has the potential to be very great. The Characters so far are interesting and have each their own distinct personalitys. There are still many open questions. Furthermore is the backround Story of the Protagonist somewhat lacking at the Moment. But all in all I really like it and World love to read more.