Jaxsin
This volume was amazing, while the love was a little rushed you’ve been improving as you go. Deku doesn’t seem like a 2d character and his quirk can be used to explain his extreme changes in personality. The next volume should have him go through some internal struggle. He betrayed his mom, his ‘friends’, and I doubt he doesn’t feel at least some remorse for killing a bunch of people. Since he won’t be using his quirk as much when he’s caring for Toga, maybe the mental corruption will be lower and Deku will realize what he has done and must come to terms with it. An apology to his mother or some form of reconciliation because Deku doesn’t hate his mom. And if he saves Eri that could be a way to make up for the evils he did. He is still a villain but he should keep some morals and by raising Eri with Toga as a mom(I would love to see this) their relationship can grow. And than throw in the heroes kidnapping Eri under the pretense of ‘saving’ and Deku goes on another kill spree. Hope this comment gives some ideas. (I still want Deku and Toga to be Eri’s parents and get some wholesome scenes)
Well, this is one hell of a ride, i honestly love the story a lot, its an interesting take on a different possible route in the original story. I love how he struggles with the quirk and how it affects him, the different interactions he has with others, especially when he goes nuts. Though i binged this and now i am sad and lonely and wishing for more chapters :( So i shall eagerly wait for more.