Reviews of Awaken, Lifomancer !

It's time for me to do the shameless author and write a review so here I am :D I guess I'll write what I want to do with my novel and how my characters will evolve in the future. I hope that my story will remain interesting and new as I try to create a point of view from my MC that I didn't see anywhere else : He is ruthless yet he still enjoy some company. He has spent a long, long time alone and see the world as something to destroy in order to get his revenge but still wish to enjoy his time doing his deeds. That's why I added brighter characters to the side in order to give a bit of humanity to the story. This is how I see the world and my story, it's not something black or white : It's a tinge of grey. (those who read until chapter 11 may understand something.) Anyway, I hope you enjoy your reading and/or give me some feedback about what you appreciated/hated. I always welcome discussions about my choices or simply music, if you have some that you want me to discover don't hesitate :D

Quite an enjoyable read, with an mc that doesnt seem like a retard, unlike too many other novels around, he's evil but caring about his people and i honestly can't wait to hear more bout his past and powers. The world building seems fine too for now and the plot is interesting but I can't say more for now since there's not enough chapters. The grammar is quite good, awesome if compared to other authors that tell us english is not their main language. So overall, it seems like a great story with a lot of potential, just needs more attention since i found it by mistake.

Awesome novel, some minor righting issues, but nothing that cant be fixed over time! Really liked the mc.

It is an amazing light novel not fast paced but not to slow either the characters are amazing Jack's companions dont just push him around overall I think it's an amazing read.

It's a nice novel, mc is not a stupid which is a +1 for me. The companions are pretty interesting and development of story and background is pretty nice though the english can be a little clunky at times, it's bearable. Though ybh I didn't expect much sonce it said the author was not good at english but it surprised me since english is pretty decent. P.S: The author has a nice taste in music ;)

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