yung_scumdidum
Please continue writing: My review- I feel like a stranded magikarp at one side I want to try reading this, but the other the parts I did read don’t fit the atmosphere I like, I like more antihero or villain type. ( so I know you writing style is not for me by I hope you continue writing as power ranger Fanfiction is the most hardest writing to find)- good luck with you story - if you still want some ideas, try to centralize the power structure as when I see people write they sometimes spread out the myths behind the power to far and everything becomes convoluted (example: so a new charter gets added in (and has powers outside of canon universe powers), all of a sudden some people will be interested what’s the origin of that power?, so that power came from there, then how did that place come into being, and eat..