K_B_Bloom
This is one of the BEST novels I have read on here! There are some mistakes here and there but it doesnβt matter! This story is so good! It has made me cry so much! My heart truly breaks for the main character and everything he is going through! The characters in this story really make me feel some type of way! Keep up the good work author! This is truly amazing. I really hope you keep writing.
Why do I feel that Elijah is Will destined mate half brother???? Am loving the story, more update β€β€β€ππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I am in utter awe with this story. I came upon this book with just general interest of scrolling for new stories and I started to read a chapter as omegas and alphas are an interest of mine. I began on Friday evening and now it is Tuesday evening and I have finished all chapters that have been posted. I was hooked from the first chapter (minute one) and I couldnβt stop reading. I donβt usually like to read online as I like to hold the book in my hands, turn the page over physically, but I cannot fault anything about this at all. Thank you so much author for creating such a masterpiece, I cannot wait for the next chapter to be released and I look forward to reading when it is time for the right end to this story.
Brilliantly written. I find the development of the story especially good. The pacing is great, the characters are amusing and the story and world building is fantastic. My only problem would be how the readers never get a break with all the issues the MC faces but that's what I love about it. Always keeps me on my feet. Props to the author for such a well written story and for keeping such a consistent update schedule.
I really liked the novel, but I had to drop it because it lacked just one thing. Consistency i dont regret reading but at some point I didn't enjoy the arbitrary change in the plot anymore, characters sounds schizophrenic, things happens for no reason but to be "unexpected". but I enjoyed the smut and the good writing.
I've just finished binge reading the whole thing in just two days. (Honestly it's closer to one tho) The author does a wonderful job developing the characters to make believable decisions that actually have an effect on the story and world around them. I can't comment on the updating so you get a free pass with that π the only thing I took points off for was the world building, mostly because there wasn't a lot of it, but when it was implemented, it fit in splendidly with the story and writing. The writing reads smoothly with only a few minor trip ups when the Author occasionally writes the wrong name (something I also do at times) overall a great story, and as I'm sure you've seen in other reviews, it's quite the tear-jerker, so strap in and keep some tissues nearby, you'll need them ππ