Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancient Genes

The change in point of you destroyed your story it stops the flow. Just like a poorly written sentence.

Why this many POV's

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And the plot thickens...

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

fking POVS

nice

It is spelled “Pretty” not preety

thanks for the chapter

When writing a stutter I don’t think it’s necessary to add a letter to every single word :/

Thnx

Thx

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