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Comments of chapter undefined of The Hyuga Gamer

Trash1326
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But yeah honestly sorry for the wait ive Had it hard with family recently and with this whole covid thing i couldnt bring myself to Get in the app

Na1gel
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you should put up a "female protagonist" as a tag in the start :D , fk i was hyped up only to get slapped in the face

WinnieLePooh
WinnieLePoohLv13WinnieLePooh

Imma be real, I'm still routing for NaruXHina

The_Tower
The_TowerLv1The_Tower

Well... As a man I would have not chosen to become a girl no matter what the other choices were, but I guess the author is different. I just hope it wont be weird with a romance or something to Naruto. Although, man soul hinata and sakura... it has possibilities.

Legacy_24
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Can I ask why you didn’t have them awaken sooner than three months before grad? Not complaining its your fic just tryna figure out why take so much time to train away

Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv5Insane_Pumpkin

And from the first chapter power scale is ****ed up... Well it's not rlly wierd as 90% of similar fanfics have the same problem.... 1st thing you are not born with chakra control... you should put a potential there not %. 2nd If you put their health and chakra in numbers try to get them right... Sakura was absolute trash at the start she was a fangirl on diet and her chakra control was partially so good becausr of how small her chakra amount was. 2.1 similar for naruto, uzumaki was known for vitality so more health there. 3rd you didn't mention any perks or talent even though you mentioned health chakra and chakra control... Well that's it from me hope to see it go for at least 20 chapters.

OscureteMarionette
OscureteMarionetteLv1OscureteMarionette

Cancelada?

Hazerithious
HazerithiousLv4Hazerithious

what happened to the rest of the chapters?

WantBeGamerKing
WantBeGamerKingLv1WantBeGamerKing

thinking an man in girl body and that so weird lol😂 but i think this fanfict will be wonderful in the future

Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingLv4Splendora_Gaming

https://discord.com/invite/9MQCns 'Your' should not be at the end of it. I figured it out so this link worked.

kratatosungod
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thanks

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Beliel
BelielLv2Beliel

Hello there It was interesting When choosing who to reincarnate more options could have been added As when choosing the world Or rather a reasonable explanation Maybe compatibility with mindset Suddenly remembering the memories of the previous life should have had more work Like seeing the accidental kiss of Naruto and Sasuke Later the development could continue with the new feelings as a woman The power level is poorly balanced from the start In the end even her plans are too sudden Team seven doesn't stay together long After the ascent exam they separate and the time jump enters If the problem is how to continue later You could also force the eleven of konaha early Causing certain information about the enemy to be revealed Anyway it could have been better

pain19441944
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please tell me your going to continue to work on this???? it's the first hinita story and I'm really impressed with it so far

Erm99
Erm99Lv4Erm99

Thanks for the chapter

Esiyx
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Thanks for the chapter

Emilbks
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