Trash1326
And from the first chapter power scale is ****ed up... Well it's not rlly wierd as 90% of similar fanfics have the same problem.... 1st thing you are not born with chakra control... you should put a potential there not %. 2nd If you put their health and chakra in numbers try to get them right... Sakura was absolute trash at the start she was a fangirl on diet and her chakra control was partially so good becausr of how small her chakra amount was. 2.1 similar for naruto, uzumaki was known for vitality so more health there. 3rd you didn't mention any perks or talent even though you mentioned health chakra and chakra control... Well that's it from me hope to see it go for at least 20 chapters.
Hello there It was interesting When choosing who to reincarnate more options could have been added As when choosing the world Or rather a reasonable explanation Maybe compatibility with mindset Suddenly remembering the memories of the previous life should have had more work Like seeing the accidental kiss of Naruto and Sasuke Later the development could continue with the new feelings as a woman The power level is poorly balanced from the start In the end even her plans are too sudden Team seven doesn't stay together long After the ascent exam they separate and the time jump enters If the problem is how to continue later You could also force the eleven of konaha early Causing certain information about the enemy to be revealed Anyway it could have been better