PelicanEel
Writing Quality: 4 Stars -You might notice some misspellings throughout the whole story and some wrong grammar and many more. The reason for that is because English is not my native language. So it is very hard for me to construct a sentence as I don't know many English words. But hey, you can still read and understand it. So yeah! Updating Stability: 5 Stars -Well, I update 6-7 chapters/week. So I will shamelessly give myself a 5star. Story Development: 5 Star -Another shameless 5 stars for me. Because I like where my story is going. Character Design: 3 Star -Because I use different characters, persons or whatever you may call them that came from different sources. But some of the characters were created by that's why 3 stars. World Background: 5 Star Nothing much is known at this point in the story. But everything will be known as the story continues. You just have to wait for it.
I really don't like this novel the mc strength barely increases almost of his mission revolve around summons and never increases his strength 1/10 times. This novel revolves around kingdom building? Mc needs to be strong when if thats to happen currently he's only slightly above average. 26 chapters in why have still not seen the mc's strength, also there are many more reasons but I don't want to rant any long and this is a TRASH NOVEL.To some people this novel might not be but to me it is just TRASH.
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Don't listen to the naysayers who wants the protagonist to be some overpowered idiot who is overly dependent on the system. Instead, you made the right choice of giving Lori limitations to his power: this will force him to struggle through adversity using his wits and intelligence. In keeping with the 'summoner' theme, the Lori should not be more powerful than his summons, because what is the point of calling for help if you are already strong enough to overcome everything.