Reviews of A second chance in Remnant. (RWBY Fan-Fic) DROPPED!

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Its really not bad at first but then its draggs longer and longer there what now 68 chaps??? and still no start of the Canon so when you want to read it because you see Hey its a RWBY Fan-Fic forgett it. Otherweiss as i sad not bad but when you here to read about RWBY Academy and stuff dont bother wait till the canon starts at dont now chap 200 ??? maybe ???

A delightful read. Lots of world and character development that canon didn't have, a few OC's that don't take away from the source material and a slow build up that not enough fan-fics utilize to build anticipation :)

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the story plot is good but the character relationships development aren't executed well enough it feels too forced and fast I suggest taking it slow, maybe even make it seem like the people see the mc as being weird for being too friendly too fast cause we know the mc is a reincarnated person and he will know who he wants to get close to although I like the fights and the plot but the relationships just put me off this review is made as only after reading up to chapter 10 so I don't know if there is an improvement for later chapters

Before the review I just want to say that I didn't watch or read the original I only know the basics of it cuz I looked it up on wiki so my review will be from perspective of someone who knows almost nothing about series and it's original story. So about the story of your work, I just fell in love with it, it's interesting and engaging although I don't see any bigger goal of our MC as he just kinda wonders here and there exploring the world and well I really like the journey part of the story with him being hunted down and when he finally settled down a bit it makes sense with the story being as enjoyable as the travel part. Another thing is our MC, he is a Faunus so discrimination is a must and I think you really nailed this part down, the racism is there and we feel it through the whole time but our MC is strong and mature enough to just not give a f*ck also the political background with White Fang and all is really well done but I think it was already in original but well at least you didn't f*ck it up by changing it too much and making it more complicated than necessary. But coming but to our MC or his character I just like him he is human(Faunus) and he makes mistakes he has his regrets and sorrows but the best thing is that throughout the story he grows and his character changes in justifiable way and we can understand why he thinks like that. Other characters shown in there are also good and they to feel human and your interactions are well done dialogues feels natural and not forced. The world around is interesting and full of things to explore the places you go to just seem real enough to imagine them well. Ps. Harem is good doesn't feels forced, and I really didn't expect Pyrrha to seriously do that good job with that. And SERIOUSLY BRING THE F*CKING LEMOS WE'VE WAITED LONG ENOUGH!!!! I like that he doesn't break promises but but just...I'm really torn apart by your decisions...and I don't even remember names of those two just let them meet or what idk...

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

i love lolis................................................................................................................................

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I'm enjoying that the mc is taking time to explore the world and build up some lore that will later serve as a foundation for who the mc is and his motivations once we get to canon

Awesome novel, you won't regret reading it guaranteed, the only complaint is it doesn't have enough chapters to validate the cannon taking too long to start. Other than that it is an awesome book.

Mmm contexto bien , el diseño de personaje deja algunas cosas por desear , la historia de desarrolla bien pero hay varios detalles como pyrra siendo novia de el por casi como una tontería y las hermanas dejaste la historia de lado que fue bueno , una vez a la semana sería poco pero somos humanos xD , y la cálida está bien para ser un fanfic

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