SHADOWSLASH
don't you mean, 'Valkyrie?'
The character designs, dialogues and storyline seems very basic.
monster intelligence being dimmed down way too much
Hmmmmmm....grammar plzzzz
Mmm instead of naming himself maybe his mother could have named him maybe his fur is black in some spots and they look like slashes??
i cant bear to read this..im dropping
hmmm. this wowould have been good if the grammar is good and more depth? its very basic...
True, normal monsters won't think to lead them to humans, not in the monsters mentality inteligent or not.
The "san" is a bit annoying for me till now
more details enough for readers to visualize in there heads
what's the point of having good story if you can't even understand!
I really like this story I appreciate all and the bests is its from an animal version and not always human type.
are they foxes or demi-human-fox
exp
A true hero starts by helping with the local problems around the home.
Thanks for the chapter.
aside from the obvious grammar mistakes, I LOVE IT
Thanks
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