Ooukination
The opening pace of this was very casual and slow. I kept waiting for something exciting to happen when finally, the protagonist, Kurai, was sent to deliver some pie to a boy at an abandoned train station. Which ended up being a really tragic but touching story. It was around this time that the writer confirmed magic existed in this story. The opening few paragraphs where a “letter appeared out of nowhere” sort of tipped me off but I wasn’t quite sure. The writer was very detail in describing the magical aspects of this story, such as the broomstick the postman uses to get around. The fact that Kurai is such a kind postman who also uses dark magic was very unique and exciting.
First of all, I love your cover, you got great skills! After I saw the cover I had my expectations and unfortunately, there were not really met (at least in the beginning). The pace was super slow, at some point, I just asked myself if I am reading a "postal sitcom" where nothing really happens, besides basic relationships between two human beings. Hopefully, things are getting better later on and who knows, maybe it is one of these novels that start all gently and will go very deep & dark haha. #Iwish Good luck author. That's just my opinion.
The romance in this novel is great and excellent! Every character is unique and described profoundly by the author. I did not notice and misspelled vocabularies and terms. The story development has an amazing and perfect pace, and the author seems to update frequently. Readers won't get left behind. Keep up the good work author!!!
I don’t usually read these type of novels but I could recommend it to everyone here in WN who just want to relieve stress as they read. The story is immersing with descriptive elements that are just detailed enough without dragging the plot and pacing behind. The characters have a depth to them as well. Overall a promising read.
I'd say, among the many fantasy genre floating out there, this one has a very unique premise. The magic system is very elaborate and interesting that it opens to the reader a whole new world--something real and alive. The characters too are unique, especially the main character and his girlfriend. I love their chemistry. I also love the fact that the side characters didn't feel 2 dimensional and had depth in their personalities. However, it's downside would be the grammar. The grammar needs some work, something that a writer develops as time passes on. May the ink keep writing with this one.
The story is interesting, as well as the premise. I like the mystery looming in the background. The world too is impressive and well constructed. However--the only downside would be the grammar, I think the author should improve on that. This is not something that is forced, it is something that grows over time. So keep up author 👍😌😁😊