Josephine1112
I am the writer of the novel and I am saying that you should read it right now. It's worth your time. ๐ถ๐๐๐๐คค๐๐ค๐คซ๐ค๐ค๐๐คญ๐ค๐ช๐ค๐คญ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ค๐๐คญ๐ค๐คซ๐๐ด๐ค๐๐ค๐ด๐คญ๐คซ๐ข๐๐คจ๐ด๐๐คค๐๐ก๐โ ๐ฅต๐ค ๐ฒ๐ค ๐๐๐๐๐๐คค๐๐๐๐คค๐๐คค๐๐๐๐ด๐๐ง๐ค ๐ค ๐งโน๐โน๐ฅถ๐ค ๐ธ๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐พ๐ผ๐ธ๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐ธ๐ฝ๐พ๐ฝ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐พ๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐
nice book.... should try it. โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ โฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
This is a novel with an interesting plot that was ruined by bad grammar. I enjoy the game and fantasy elements immensely. However, that enjoyment gets drowned like a rat when I realised just how bad the grammar is. Even the MTL novels on this site have much better grammar...and this aspect of this novel can be solved about 50% if the author used a grammar checking device or just typed their story on microsoft word first and 100% if the author got an editor.
decent story...โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ nuce action โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ gre8 adven6โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
enjoyed...โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
good fantacy ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐๐โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐๐๐๐๐๐
this story is dam good yar... ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ ๐ค๐คญ๐คญ ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Nice Novel. ๐๐ค ๐ณ๐ค ๐ง๐ฅณ๐ง๐ค ๐๐ฅณ๐๐ณ๐ฅณ๐๐ฅณ๐ณ๐ฅณ๐๐ฅณ๐ณ๐ฅณ๐ณ๐ฅณ๐ณ๐ณ๐ง๐ง๐ฅณ๐๐ค ๐ฅบ๐ฅณ๐ณ๐ณ๐ฅณ๐๐ฅณ๐ณ๐ค ๐๐ค๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐งก๐๐ฌ๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐ฏ๐๐ค ๐ค๐ค ๐๐ค ๐ณ๐ค ๐ฅถ๐ค ๐๐ฎ๐ณ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คค๐๐๐๐ฌ๐ค ๐ฒ๐ค ๐๐ต๐ฅณ๐ณ๐๐ต๐๐ณ๐๐
โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โฅ๏ธ๐ฅโฅ๏ธ๐ฅโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
nice story....good plot......๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ enjoying it... โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐คโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
I really have to applause the author for his/her plot. The story line is intriguing and I would have really loved this novel, if not for itโs Grammer. While I get that novels on webnovel canโt have perfect grammer; this bookโs grammer is way below the normal level of grammer seen in most webnovels. This book has potential if the author would be willing to get someone to spend a little more time to edit itโs grammer. (Or you can first type it out googledocs or smth and get grammerly to help check it(grammerly isnโt already correct, but I think it would be somewhat helpful for the author to use if he/she really doesnโt have a lot of time.) Anyways! Iโll stick around for a while, hopefully the grammer improves... :3๐
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