RichBoyWinston
Hi, you probably heard "shameless author here" countless times already, so let's skip that. I already had the idea of putting Pokemon in a cultivation world, but after reading a certain novel, that spark turned into a fire. I can assure you my grammar is readable, though there are some grammatical errors here and there. If you guys have any suggestions or questions, just reply to this review here. Goodbye :D
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Fuck gender bender i really want to read the story but somehow these things just make me uncomfortable, great idea but next time just make the mc a female or male dont change there gender i remember this one good novel that got ruined because the mc who was a old man turned his avatar to a loli girl... now how can i read that **** and not feel anything wrong. If you dont want any romance just don't introduce love interest make the girls fall for his companions or just make the mc a loner but don't ignore females completely just make it that they have a crush on him but he just leaves be it for another place or realm.
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Love the story so far there arenβt many pokemon stories in the platform so this is a very good step to provide inspiration to other authors, I like the Main character in the way his demeanor is changing subtly from a modern world person that has never fight to the cultivator person that must fight and stand up for himself, the only recommendation that i would to make is that i want the cultivator world to influence the pokemons, wath i mean is for example there are many wacky martial arts in cultivator novels with wacky effects, what is stopping a fighting pokemon to learn this arts, there are many spirit fruits that enhance elemental powers on cultivators or adds kinda superpowers what is stopping a pokemon from eating one of those fruits, i really thing that the novel would become not better but more immersive because all transmigration novels is about how the cultivator world influences the main character and i want the same happening with the pokemons Love the story and keep it up π
This is so good!!!! I actually learned some new stuff about pokemon and how theyβre ability works. Wow. This is also interesting with the gender bender, im a fan of gender bender. This is great. I canβt wait for more!! Iβll kill you if you drop this! But keep up the good work!!! ππΎβ€οΈ
i love everything about it really, its a new feeling to a pokemon fic that ive always had read. Im always looking for something that will want me to come back to and never get tired of reading. im always reading to get my head away from school a bit and this stiry overall puts a ray of sun on me...thats if school doesn't ruin it ππ