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Reviews of Ancient Saiyan in ATG(UP FOR ADOPTION)

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Ancient Saiyan in ATG(UP FOR ADOPTION)

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Chad_Thundercock
Chad_ThundercockLv2Chad_Thundercock

This fix has quite a lot of potential, you just need to fix grammar, spacing, capitalization, run on sentences, unnecessarily big paragraphs, and an editor. If you are interested I could be a sort of beta reader / editor, just message me if interested.

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Culture_Lover
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Reveal spoiler

musgrave_logan
musgrave_loganLv1musgrave_logan

Good job Ed Boy, the overall is story is fantastic, I would read this anywhere, on the plain, in an attic, or when I’m hiding from god, thank you for this experience