Honestly, your comment made me laugh. I never thought of it that way till someone pointed it out for me 😆😆
I was just more focused in making the MC's life dramatic in this chapter than anything else, really 😌😌
first chapter and I can just imagine everything clearly in my mind while reading this chapter, so far I am sure to finish reading this story for as long as its continuing
Man! This is some mind-boggling, creative writing and amazing intro! I'm not gonna get surprised if you got offered a contract in a month given your stable updates. I salute you bro!
damn...
i hope he doesnt face too many hardships in his next life. this prologue got me almost tearing up. u can really feel how much his people loved him. damn u got me