Se ele tivesse ido pra outro mundo e não continuado na terra teria sido interessante,mas a terra vai e vira isso, achei meio chato pqr todos ganharam um sistema e monogatari vei pro mundo real, se isso não tivesse acontecido aí eu leria
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The writing is a mess reading it gives me a headache.
The protagonist is unlikeable.
The world background is confusing,is this an anime world or the real world?
Either way im not going to continue reading this.
I sincerely hope that you will be able to improve your writing skill.