Comments of chapter undefined of Journey To Become A True God

The concept behind the novel is interesting, but with the way the grammar is right now the novel is completely unreadable.

Please use a free grammar program. The reading experience would be so much higher than now.

Man....is this machine translation indonesia-english ?

Kindly please check your grammar and vocabulary.. its confusing..

I'm gonna have a stroke trying to read this, but I'll give it a chance

Damn please check the grammar and vocab....

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please fix this grammar

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I thought he had more than one girlfriend.

Damn the grammar kills it, bro I suggest you download grammar my, it’s free and I reckon it’ll improve your writing or translation by a mile. Please I plead you to download grammarly, it’ll do good for both you and the readers.

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Wtf do you put a novel in English if you don’t even speak the language?! The experience was so painful!

The grammar is so-so please check it carefully But I love your piece ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

what do you think guys?

Hmm....Story is quiet Good,but if you keep on doing same simple grammatical mistakes I recon that nobody would try reading it again , Of course rather than your own friends