Comments of chapter undefined of Brightest Doom
Brightest Doom
BigToFu
Chapter comments35
What exactly is going on?? First some soccer match is going on then some mentions of international islands and plans, then a random conflict of harley, some money is thrown then ice cream is mentioned for the third time. Some kissing is going on In car with harley and ivy then some mob comes to attack them and the next thing I know is an operation is taking place with Damien. This chapter was not on the level of the previous ones and my least favorite also. It was poorly edited and executed. And I seriously am not liking the constant mention of Damien. If author, you wanted to do same as with fastest man alive with fluffy moments between MC and his daughters, to increase the readers intrest, then you were clearly unsuccessful compared to your other story. Like it's okay if your want to provide for Damien but constant sympathizing and all is damaging my engagement to the story. I skipped a lot of paragraphs from this chapter as they contained useless information. To keep the stroy more interesting it would be better to reduce focus from Damien, show more of MCs plans and actions, current situation of heroes and villains, bring in new women for the Mc, create a new epic conflict or fight with know characters instead of unknown or unpopular ones. This is just my opinion, it's alright if you disagree.
Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story Great work like always and can't wait to read your next chapters thanks for your hard work Waiting for new chapters for your other story as well: The Fastest Man Alive-Marvel
