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I rarely put a review but I must say the novel is to my liking, the mc is not naive that follow the rules blindly nor a beta mc, he acts to what benefits him, he doesn't trust blindly and that rare in the fanfics, I don't have many words to add but I hope you add more chapters and don't stop the novel. it would be good if the mc built a secret force to use them and put out his chakra to better use. and I hope you add Tsunade and Mei to his women list. anyway thanks for the nice work ----------------------- note: English is not my first so sorry for the errors
This is an interesting spin on the original Naruto story line, I am enjoying it thoroughly! Please keep doing your best. The character development is great as well. Kurenai is one hot mama for sure. I wish I could see a picture of the main character:) Both Danzo and orochimaru will make great additions to the for line up. I wonder if he will come in contact with the Akatsuki at some point. I like the different P.OV. you added as well, I am looking forward to the next chapter! As a female reading this story I can say it is interesting , has very amazing build up and is well grounded with intention<3
☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.
The Beginning was good but then it got so slow peacet the when you read it you think you move back in time. And Fuck you you sons of bitches Spam bots. Your mother should have swallowed you but no, she had to take a shit on the floor and your father then jizzed on it and boom, that's when you fucking spam bots where born.