May1st
It was Clara’s first day of work.Her job required her to clean a rich It was Clara’s first day of work.Her job required her to clean a rich man’s mansion for high pay. After failing to keep a stable job, Clara’s friend Sonya referred her to a cleaning job in which she worked in. Clara, however, was terrible at keeping a job as she would be framed repeatedly by her colleagues. Her astounding beauty and grace led to rush of jealousy from workers who felt threatened by her. ’’Clara, for both our sakes, please try not to get fired “ , Sonya pleaded. This is the first four paragraphs of your story. It can be improved easily without much effort. I hope this doesn't come of as rude but you can do some much better with this story.