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Honest Review Wow! Talk about finding a hidden gem! The Good: Writing quality is outstanding! Hard to believe this is the author's first novel! The system is easy to understand and giving it hard limits like that adds to the amount of creativity needed to bring out the MCs power. The amount of details added to... everything... really helps keep the story alive, just be careful about going overboard with the descriptions sometimes. The Bad: Really hard to find the bad in this one, maybe just the chapters are a little shorter than expected causing immersion to break. I personally don't like that everything seems to go the MCs way, but I also understand that it was designed that way. The Neutral: Same as before, not a fan of everything going the MCs way, so I am not going to take off for that. Also wish the chapters were a tad longer, I guess I just consider about 1500 words a minimum.
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Story seems very interesting so far. So far there are quite a few blah blah moments where the author repeatedly beats home the same point making it easy to skip nearly an entire chapter and not miss anything. The interaction between characters seems to be missing a little as the MC is an old wise guy(read past 3chapters). Other than those issues I look forward to seeing what comes next.
THE TRANSLLATION IS EXCELLENT(WRITING QUALITY GREAT), STORY DEVELOPMENT IS DEEP AND PROFOUND,SAME FOR CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND WORLD BACKGROUND. STABILITY UPDATES ARE A PROBLEM. WILL BE WILLING TO GIFT STORY MORE IF CHAPTER UPDATES ARE INCREASED TO 2 A DAY. HAVE ALREADY GIFTED STORY OVER 300 COINS.
I was really looking forward to it after the first few chapters had a good thing going but just had to make him op out of no were I get obtaining strength/items or skills I mean that's life its not really a clichΓ© but dang he got the whole pie looks, experience, gifts I bet he's really smart in every subject after chapter 10, Jack of all trades and master of all is just lazy in my opinion but shows to be still enjoyable if you don't expect much of a challenge in any scenario and an opt out of any situation.