Comments of chapter undefined of I'm the King Of Technology

How they talk sounds so scripted, and unnatural

Boring Test? . . . Normal Swordfighting? . . . I. Don't. Think. So . . .

Author your american english is good, but it make it harder for me to read, a Brit. Because i keep snagging on to the different spellings breaking the story up

I like the moral of the story, but I feel like a lot of the message isn’t expressed indirectly, but through narration.

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Author your English is splendid! I'm loving your story, the journey's been really fun! Thanks for the chapter! :D

thank you for the chapters.

oh yeah

interesting story

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Too many unnecessary details & filters, all side characters are flat lined, I’m gonna try read more since you said its slow paced, but if you do not pay attention to the commenters this novel will be drooped

What day is it since mc came to this world??? It would be cool if you put like ‘Day 32’.... And i think it’s a little bit rush and bit too much description... These chapters are boring

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thanks

Interesting

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