It's good actually, I can understand the flow of the story. The FL is likable and the ML is interesting as well. I do not usually read these kind of materials but this one stands out. Not only it has potential but I find the story and development good.
For the ratings, I say...
Writing Quality is good, you need to double check some mistakes which is very minor to affect the flow of the story.
Updates, I do not rate on this one.
Story development is perfect, just the way it is... only few chapters I read and I already had the grasp of the story.
Character design is also good, I rate it perfect.
World background is also perfect.
That's all for my comments and ratings. Keep up the good work! :)
