Ultor The Legend of the True Hero_DC

This novel is like sex. It hurts at first (grammar). But later there is only pleasure. (story and content). ;) Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like! Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like! Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!

The rating that this book currently has is extremely generous considering all the spelling and grammar issues the story has. It's hard to follow along when you're trying to understand the wording that the author uses.

Word of warning: the premise of the story is amazing and the plot itself is not half bad, but everything is ruined by the worst grammar you'll ever see. It actually induces physical pain from reading more than a couple chapters at once, so be prepared for literal headache if you decide to dive in. P.S.: I really hope author finds himself an editor, it would be a waste of a good fanfic if nothing gets fixed

very good and your English improving very fast .............. i hope to say the same thing about myself.........:" 🤣..............................

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Well this mine of rating do look in the middle. But you do understand that your writing quality is still terrible. Bear with it and hope you gotten better later on author :) Much I like the DC comics. I don't like how the heroes perceived to even resolute what true justice is. Though I do know for sure that sometimes there be deaths towards the villains. But that's rare as ever be. Even this superhero universe is dark and edgy compared to Marvel. The heroes with the biggest hypocrite Batman only just create a repeated cycle. Where bad guy get caught, imprisoned but escaped later on to continue more evil deeds then once again caught. THE CYCLE REPEATS. This reality even fictional need someone like a ghost rider that delivered TRUE JUSTICE.

The author has a very unique approach to building his character. Stroy is interesting and the universe gives it alot of space to grow. But the author can not use his pronouns right and makes the story confusing to read. Story has alot of potential and is worth the effort to read even if the misuse of pronouns makes it very confusing fron time to time.

Great story👍👍👍👍👍 x

it good i hope there more to come i like the idea very fresh plus a dc story is hard to come by hope to see great thing out of this angel and demon very good loveing it

Lack of novels that happen in the DC world because most of them end without even starting the story or making an impact in the world so you have support

If he's half angel he shouldn't be able to feel lust or sexual desire only the will to protect and heal and if he's also half demon he shouldn't feel lust or pride or anything since he's not the embodiment of sin but the prosecuter to condemn the wicked since he's created by god he shouldn't have impure taught 's.i noticed author changed the mc's mindset to someone debaucherus and to someone like at start he's all out justice the real way along with being Faithfull but now he's falling and he won climb back up since an angel fall it's a fallen angel the if it continues its a demon of the 7 deadly sins witch is satanic like lusifer who ****ers up humanity and is the starter for all sins.

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Honestly the grammar is fucking horrendous and there are times where you actually have to think for a min to figure out what in the seven hells it's supposed to say, but in all its actually a good read if you can get past the absolutely horrifying grammar which many can't, and I can't say I blame them I'm just to bored to care for such a little thing because it doesn't take to much effort to figure out what they meant. All in all good read, nice development throughout the story, the writing is slowly showing improvement, and the background is explained well enough considering it's a fanfic about DC if you don't know the background of DC why are you reading a story of it to begin with.

The only losses is on the grammar but other than that it is very well done I’m a huge fan of this and a couple other of yours please it up.

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Pretty slow and boring............................................................................................. .

I love this story ♥️ The grammar is more of a four star, but author is really trying to make it better which i apreciate. I would like to show support so from me it is a five star. With this I would like to say thank you and wish all the best in writing and personal life. 😊

The story’s world background need some work, this is dc and the hero’s action should have some more reaction in the hero and villains community, THE BEST THING ABOUT THIS STORY IS THE RECENT UPDATE, I HOPE BOTH AUTHORS CONTINUE TO WORK TOGETHER AS THEIR CHAPTERS ARE WELL DONE