Comments of chapter undefined of Master Of Erossu Book

hmm this one ended to sad day your stories are interesting only thing i don't like is your introducing to of big world with big interesting plots that seem to have alot adventure especially pages and if I remember right something about the special girls with power like the mc and so forth but u end it without finishing any of the left over plots holes same with irtd had alot of potential to bad both got rush endings it was a fun ride but disappointing how rush they where. Hope your next story won't be as rush as this Thanks GL

I hope if you have time you will edit or rewrite your last part... sigh... it's a good story though! it always made me smile especially the first part of the story! just from the writing alone I know that you enjoys writing it! but I'm kind hoping that his second daughter will be with him especially when she gave a hint that she likes someone before she goes to adventure! and the information about lilimon and their daughter on what happened to them.

if it wasnt rushed what kind of ending will we have?

All is well that ends well Thanks for a great book Although there are a lot of mistakes with the grammar, but still enjoyed it.

Huh, its over.

The trip ended but it was an entertaining read there was no shortage of laughter👍👍👍

Thanks man for the ride!

Great book just wish the end wasn’ so rusheft

Enjoyed this book immensely. But I would have liked him to have more daughters. Keep doing what you do. Have a great writing day.

its a little disappointing that he spared his daughters to be his women... I'm kinda expecting it. :( oh well, thanks!

So at the end what was his cultivation level?!!

I read up to Chapter 444 then I stopped reading. I come back and realize you finished it huh. I'll try to finish it although I struggle remembering all the names. Although I haven't finished it I want to say it was a good read and thanks.

Atleast, you are able to end the story with major plots giving a beautiful (but yeah rushed) finish but nothing in this world is perfect so let's take the happiness out of that. Commendable work and thanks for this incredible journey. My first fully 18+ focused novel completed. 😭😭😭😭😭

thanks for chapter

I started reading your stories with "Inevitable Road to Divinity." and I cam thoroughly say that they catch your attention. I enjoyed the book a lot, but I am not a fan of Eros when he was around. Other then that, keep up the work and I hope to see more in the future.