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Comments of chapter undefined of Master Of Erossu Book

kcorny
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Does the grammar improve or can i throw shit away on the trashheap of R-18 stories on webnovel?

kcorny
kcornyLv4kcorny

Chapter 28 and it doesn't get better, maybe even worse. Dropped this btw.

Jeremy_B:Did you ever get an answer on this? Cuz it really isn't even readable.

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Cepotman
CepotmanLv4Cepotman

haha

asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4asaade_ragnarokm

trash he reincarnated but still gullible to think he wont learn he doesn't even have a brain

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Jmy620
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The first part is funny

DAT_NOVEL_BOI
DAT_NOVEL_BOILv5DAT_NOVEL_BOI

What's with the inconsistent good grammar?

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Chewyking
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The god of fluffiness lol

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azndl550
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Hahahahaha

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

asdasdssf
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Lol. Mc is basically idiot without backbone, and since he bottled up all his frustrations instead of actually standing up for himself he self destructed :D And clearly since he didn't pick up cultivation despite being talented he's quite an retard even after reincarnation. I mean... Mc has been alive for quite an while now but his mental age all around seems to be like 5. Another contradiction right off the bat is that he doesn't want to die early, but he still doesn't cultivate? He lives in freaking cultivation world where people can wipe him out casually with flick, not to mention just the health benefits you would get so you don't die early -.-

maplejvl
maplejvlLv5maplejvl

The grammar is so incredibly fucking bad lol, I don't know how people can read this. My sister back when we was in 6th grade had a better understanding of the English language LOL.

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Code_Geass_1290
Code_Geass_1290Lv2Code_Geass_1290

Wow

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KingConner
KingConnerLv15KingConner

Thanks for the chapter!!!

Keith_Potato
Keith_PotatoLv10Keith_Potato

f**k another one with an old man watching him

Steven_villamar
Steven_villamarLv1Steven_villamar

TY

Boundless_Ancestor
Boundless_AncestorLv11Boundless_Ancestor

so its second hand?

Anindito_Subagyo
Anindito_SubagyoLv10Anindito_Subagyo

too much F word

Sambingereader
SambingereaderLv2Sambingereader

I hate those kind of old man in those stories that force things on mc... he does not want your ****ty book so go find someone else ffs... Well im glad mc saw through his bull****... But hes right he needs to cultivate then kill that annoying old man!

Tempered_01
Tempered_01Lv5Tempered_01

TYftC

GoodGuyWijaya
GoodGuyWijayaLv1GoodGuyWijaya

Great start.Thanks for the chapter

311_Jack
311_JackLv4311_Jack

Thanks

mrkrabs
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