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Traversing the Anime Multiverse with a System

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Kurosis
KurosisLv4Kurosis

V nice the start was shaky but a lot better loving the hunter x hunter saga hope it lasts longer and dose not suddenly leave for a new world and leave us hanging

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southgamez
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Hey all. I will be trying to make each worlds time spent, around 20 to 35 chapters each. There might be worlds with less chapters but those will be filler chapters. I hope you all enjoy the novel!

CornboyRay
CornboyRayLv4CornboyRay

It's too cheesy. This is too generic. The main character has a flip flop personality and never stays consistent. The author doesn't know how to write complex characters. He completely makes a disgrace of what the original creators of the licenses intended. For example, Aizen turns into a hot-headed buffoon who reacts on emotions while Ichigo turns into a submissive moron. He turns Shanks into an unintelligent idiot while he turns White Beard into... Well, he's still vaguely White Beard. Another problem that I had is that the author decided to make a love interest pop up out of nowhere just for the sake of having a love interest. She has a generic loli personality that you would see repeated constantly in other terrible FanFictions. The author obviously doesn't know how to write any type of romance, but yet continuously forces the reader to read about his garbage fire of a relationship, leaving us to cringe until our faces turn inside out. Then, he has the nerve to go the harem route! He can't even write one female character right, let alone multiple! I feel from my experience of reading 100 chapters that the author doesn't exactly know what he wants the story to be. He also doesn't know who he wants his character to be, which makes for terrible storytelling and character development. I wouldn't read this again. I would rather go outside and do something with my life... Which i guess is a good thing.

DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

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Blackwater
BlackwaterLv11Blackwater

Sorry Dude but after about 20 chaps I coun not take it anymore, your Mc gets tortured by his own family, but still calls them mom and Dad. He knew what was coming, had his wishes and still he goes along with this crap. Story itself is ok but I just can't take the Mc and his borderline stupid personality, it's OK to have a Mc that is not ultra vindictive but just not caring that you get beaten is just plain hard to read for me because it's just not realistic, not even I a fantasy setting.

Lord
LordLv2Lord

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FvkYouBoy
FvkYouBoyLv4FvkYouBoy

This is worst and irritating fanfic to read with an annoying mc.. This is really surprising that lot of people voted on this crap. Author wants other mc to get stronger than his mc so he will let his mc train the original mc and then in just a short time the original mc is already stronger than him?? THATS STTUPIIDDDD. GO TO HELL MOTHERFVKER!

Atnshadid
AtnshadidLv10Atnshadid

Well not sure what to say. This novel actually has 4.6 stars rating in 112 reviews? Come on. Novel is bad in every way possible, also the writing quality gets a negative five (-5) stars from me. Just 15 chapters in and my eyes hurt already.

derbest
derbestLv13derbest

First the mc is like ***** in heat for male characters of the anime Second the mc follows the anime story too Much There is no new experience in the story Third i think the autor is also gay because the death of mc is stupid his OWN Dick in mouth when hรฉ dies its like the autor wants to experience the same thing ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคฎ๐Ÿคฎ

PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4PUERKO_Senpai

* My native language is not English, I am just using "GOOGLE TRANSLATOR" * * {I'm going to chapter 15, but I couldn't bear to continue reading, such SHIT} * This story has a lot of errors and inconsistencies, I honestly don't understand why it has "4.6 stars", (I'm going to make it clear that I'm halfway through the hunterxhunter arc, but I can't stand it anymore the character is **** and not normal **** a FUCK !!!!) if I start writing the errors I will reach the limit of characters, for which I will only say some. -COVER PICTURE: Let's be honest that image that has the cover of the book is FUCK. -SYSTEM AND WISHES (in the hunterxhunter arc he has only made a wish, what outrages me is the use he makes of the system, being able to buy OP skills, buy bloodlines that give him cooking skills ... it's a SHIT): no I am against saving wishes, which is actually very good, but it pisses me off that it doesn't use the system, it only uses it to see its state (which doesn't make sense, for two things; first it has a value of VERY high luck compared to an average person and even so it is the friends [Leorio] who handle the girls, and second because the values โ€‹โ€‹increase in a very proportional way [100 -> 300] which is illogical, being able to buy skills which in a world like hunterxhunter would be very OP, an example would be the ROKUSHIKI of the one piece world. -TRAMA: it shows too much that the author got the fanfiction from between the ass, because the plot is ****, I am reading the part of the hunterxhunter arc where Leorio gropes the girl psychologist, murderer and still does not mention the sister of the MC (which should be the same sister of Killua), in addition the author makes the MC follow the plot of the story, being able to have used the knowledge of the plot to make the story more interesting, for example he could have trained NEN with Wing (free), but the MC pushed him away and ignored him when he was just trying to get closer, which is stupid the MC could have treated him well and made friends with him (it's better to have friends than enemies), I'm not trying to say that he became Wing's "girlfriend", only he could have been a friendly acquaintance. - CHARACTERS: the author does not know how to create characters and take them through the story, an example is killua, to which the MC transmitted his mental deficiencies.

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zsxcfvbhnmk123Lv5zsxcfvbhnmk123

Maybe I am being baised and putting a fake review just because I like reading this and am too busy rereading it to give a proper review? Thank you for not putting "lemon or H scenes" in the novel. I like having something I can read to my sibling and recommend to family members. Keep up the great work.

EijiSeishuu
EijiSeishuuLv11EijiSeishuu

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haakuman
haakumanLv4haakuman

It had good potential but was ruined by idiotic decisions and nerfs. Really frustrating to read MC make stupid decisions and lose power just to make the plot convenient.

Mad_Ghost_6904
Mad_Ghost_6904Lv2Mad_Ghost_6904

This is a cringe worthy work. It feels like a novel written for 10 year old kids to shoe friendships and family bonds. expect authors just shove in the face with bad story development. This is just bad writing the only reason it can be given time to be read is cause its a fan fiction. One of the worst useless fan fiction I have ever read.

Devidragon007
Devidragon007Lv13Devidragon007

Good story hope to see more soon Do I take kgmfifidusyaydufkszlsksjsoydtistkatjstjstksgietsfjsfjsfjwtisfuafksgxlhxhldhodgldyodyodydgosiyatosgi

Berserk_Asura
Berserk_AsuraLv11Berserk_Asura

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Erick200
Erick200Lv4Erick200

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ProfessorNoob
ProfessorNoobLv4ProfessorNoob

Full of unnecessary BS. Nerfs the Mc too much from world traveling and power lvl explanation is messy. Up to the point I read I think the Mc is gay lol don't bother reading this

SaikoYonebayashi
SaikoYonebayashiLv11SaikoYonebayashi

Try to improve your writing skill dude,and pay attention cause some time you will make some misspelling. 3 Stars for your aspiration to write this novel thought. Keep up the good work and good luck.

LENX
LENXLv4LENX

not angry just disappointed ....................................................................................................................