Reviews of Sword Dancer

Please let me know what you all think, bad or good, of my story. I'm posting this to give my own opinion of my story but I know that I am probably biased so I ask that you all read and review. All criticism is welcome and appreciated so thank you all!

Great world building! Character development is good so far, great pacing with moments that had me wondering how MC would make it out alive. Excited to see where this goes in the future.

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