No clue on how this is rated pretty high for something that seems to be written randomly....plot is pretty trash....MC is stupid.....somehow this was reviewed with good ratings by bots im guessing i dont know
Cliche protagonist and novel, dropped it because mc is that lolis slave ***********&&__&_&&&&\************************\**\\***\********\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\7777\\\\\\\7\\\7777777
Mc has a low iq he thinks himself as that edge kid who has super powers and is mega awesome but has the mental capacity of a gnat he gets abused by a dead twin tailed drill head egotistical tsundere who acts like she's the most perfect being and after mc beats up some dudes she acts like he's kinda handsome now ...anddd now you can see where this story is going... Also the mc uses katanas so you can tell it's pretty much a classic trope of all cliches and from what I can guess it will either be a harem in the end or a ton of chicks who follow him around or lust after him but he only picks one and makes him self sen loyal cause of that as he levers at all the legs ass and tits around him .... so yeah... right now he acts like he's shy and blushing and useless around females but he's 10 most guys don't even understand females at this point and have yet to see them as anything but the ones who wear dresses so yeah mc apparent,y already at 10 is past puberty and aware of females ... And the dead I might add fl is aware of him as a guy... And she's 1 dead and 2 a little kid... so we have necrophilia and child perversion? Seriously? How low are people sinking these days
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The cover looks very interesting and drew me in. The first sentence "The rich gets richer and the poor become poorer" is what got me to keep reading. Very interesting premise. Lots of action...just the way I like it!
The story is great. The first chapter is really intense and awesome. The world background is very detailed. The character design is also very fun and adventurous.
It is a new and interesting story. Continue your excellent work, MiniAce!! β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
The story seems interesting from the beginning, you are very attracted very soon. I am curious about how the story will develop. One negative thing I found is the mixing of present-past tense. I think the author should decide about what to use. If he wanted to use present tense, I suggest to use 1st person narrator protagonist that could be cool as writing style
Hi, I saw your advertisement in the 'Light Novels', FB group. Here's my initial review as a show of support to you. Hoping you could check my work too and drop some support - 'War Grounds' is the title. Keep up the good work, there are still some grammar errors, hoping you could go at it again and do some edits. For the rest, your rock the world, dude. CHEERS!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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A new story for me..must read for this..i have to put some effirts and time to read this christmas break comes..β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ