Reviews of ZORO in HSDxD

What is this bull? Generic characters, generic mc, generic mc, generic mc(important things are said three times), the mother, comes and becomes a typical person, like "Lips smile yet her eyes say something different".... ??? Why bother? I'm going to continue and upload all shortcoming here.

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Our Mc is gonna be op With õtsutsuki bloodline:rinnegan,tenseigan,sharingan,mangekyou Slayer magic:god slayer,dragon slayer,devil slayer Zanpakuto:muramasa able to use any all shikai and bankai and last but no the least all kido

Grammar is horrendous. Capitalizes maybe two sentences on any given page and never any names. Boring story straight from the wishes. Everything is generic, the descriptions lack any depth and the clichés are overused.

Story starts with a cliche and ends with one. Id honestly not be bothered by that if it was handled well. Instead he goes to be looking like zoro but with endless magical abilities, ranging otsutsuki bloodline from the get go, all the way to ever shikai and bankai of every last zanpakuto in bkeach. In other words a big stock of magical powers. Pointless. Bottom line, story has no future as the entire premise is based on a cintradiction. Omnipotent god being appears, takes energy from soul that soul gained in the void as trade. But then if god could get the soul out of the void to do all this why would he need the energy from the kids soul instead of taking it directly from the void? Makes no sense.

The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapter is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter for every day.

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i realy like this story its fun to read even if its not that long i was starting reading it and i thought it was not good but after a while it go better :D ty for your work dont drop it

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It's not zoro of course as the soul is of someone else's He only looks like zoro and his swordsmanship skills are learned from zoro nothing else

I know i am being shameless here but imma gonna keep constant release so keep following Until next time in drago...sorry sorry in a green head in hsdxd

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useless fanfic. unattractive, unimpressive,and bad grammar. honestly read this fanfic like reading manga but there's no picture.Honestly very disappointed. Too many comedies that are not important. Lazy if you already use "our MC" please use the name instead of "our MC". Your character has a name, right? Use the name don't use a.k.a or "our MC", so it's weird. Correct your bad grammar too, my eyes hurt so read this fanfic. Thanks

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It’s not even Zoro so don’t even bother. The author makes him beyond OP at the very start out of nowhere and then randomly nerfs him and honestly this novel is just f*cking trash so don’t waste your time