ElleJaye
The story is unique. It instantly captured my attention from Chapter 1. How the lead was introduced, allows one to feel the pain with her. I also like the pacing. I don't like dragging novels so hope it remains the same. Though it's still early, I can tell this novel will go a long way. Keep up the good work, author.
Unlike other cultivation novel, this one is much lighter that I, this noob in cultivation world, could actually understand and enjoyed the plot. I have read until the auction house. FL is smart and very very beautiful. I'm not sure who the ML is. I have a guess at 2 males at this time, 1 older and 1 younger, but my guess is that both are the same person? I really like to storyline, as I said, very light yet at the same time, very detailed that you can quickly picture the it in your head. How she dress, or how she looks like, where they are, etc. I really want a pet bear too! Anyway, I will keep reading it, thanks for introducing me to this beautiful work!
As an author of fantasy fiction and a hungry reader as well, I got to read the first eight chapters, and I can confidently say this novel has a promising storyline. World background is good, maybe just a little more details. The FL is charming. She reminds me of snow-white since her beautiful face seems like the one giving her trouble. Author narration and writing is clean and easy to understand. Little grammatical errors (even I have those) overall, itβs a worthy novel to try. Iβll keep this in my library and read further. The only thing I felt that need improvement is the emotions of the characters as it didnβt reach me that much. Nevertheless, I like it. Keep it up author ellejaye! I had enjoyed reading it.
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Its not a bad story nor is it a great one either. Overall I like reading it, though got to admit where I am reading have me a bit confused so I will read more chapters to understand it better. The story does have the standard trope where the FL is beyond beautiful, has her cheats, cultivation, extra powerful ML/s etc which sort of explains my rating because I have read this in several other stories no offense to the writer. I have yet to find out what makes this story special. My general opinion is that the story is okay and will be in my library for now but I'm not addicted to it. Wishing ElleJaye (author) all the best and keep it up.