NEidarous
It is an interesting read. The grammar is surprisingly good since I haven't seen many webnovels with good grammar. It is too early to comment on the characters since we still did not get a fully fleshed out character arc. But the story seems interesting with the time parallels and I'm looking forward to the updates. :)
The concept and idea of this story are very interesting. Thirty days and they are to find their true love. I like the way in which you have narrated the story, it's very clear. There are some mirror grammar problems so I will recommend you to use grammarly which is a savior of authors like us. Keep good work and I am sure your book will receive the needed attention.