Reviews of Long Past Dawn

The story is great. The characters are engaging so far the protagonist Dawn is flushed out really well. You already see her developing as a character really well. Even though the story only 12 chapters in.

I really enjoy the story the author is amazing just like the book. The character development is great and the story is interesting. A great read and I will continue to vote for it!👍👍

WOW!! I’ve read a LOT of fanfics (trust me) but THIS. This is soooooo amazing and may i say you are so talented! I recommended this to all my friends and all of them (even those who aren’t familiar with DC) really enjoyed it. I love it, 10/10! You’re amazing!!!!!!

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so far it's well written the mc needs a little polishing but were only 6 chaps in so I wont take points off for the character just yet I'll do a second review and chap 25. To author the only advice I can think to give is chapter size is kinda small so if you can extend them that would be best

I want more please!!! I love it, so far! 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

This fanfic is great the story really gets to you and sucks you right in the characters are portrayed wonderfully with some slight humor in there.

Very good and I love it. Can't wait to see where it goes, so far there are a lot of interesting characters and I can't wait for the next chapter. Absolutely love it.

Really great fanfic. I like the plot so far and I can't wait for more. I like the character and the OCs so I just hope that the author comes back and not just leave it at that cliffhanger. But really great novel, 10/10 recommend it. Also EulaliaxAnastasia?

It was an incredibly good read, was honestly expecting you to have dropped this story after the contest had ended, really glad to see that I was wrong.

This was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

I love it 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Really awesome😭😭poor Dawn tho😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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I really really enjoyed reading this. This story is really fun to read, and it's so easy to get soked up into the words. It's also quite funny and makes me snicker.

The story starts strong, and is well written. Background is...well...if you've watched any DC movie it won't be hard to get into the story, but for propriety's sake I'll say it's great. A bit too strong on the Superhero intros, but that's part of the world-building(and the MC's world) and doesn't detract from the story in any way. The MC is kinda refreshing if you consider the vibe given off by most heroes of her world, though we might get to see some of what gets down played or downright derailed in the screens (the Flash wasn't supposed to be a moody, silent, brooding hero) Overall, looking forward to more chapters. This review is preliminary (chapter 7-ish) and I see no reason not to rain on the praise as of now, and this probably won't change easily if the current progress is anything to go by. I give 💕. Lots and lots of 💞.

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